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Serrated Secrets

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Literature Text

She's crying
crystal red droplets
of blood
and
Screaming
razor
sharp
words

that hide her
p r e t t y  p i n k  l i e s
Another short one.
Again, this was longer to begin with but I didn't like it the rest.
Is this one also too short? I hope I can convey what I
m trying to, but who knows.
What do you think about the formatting? :s

-catsareforever
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Ultima-Squirrel's avatar
Very dark! "Razor sharp words" - nice choice of wording *finally got around to reading old deviations*